SATURDAY
In the morning
7.53am
One bright unusual day,
I heard some lightening bursting to get out
whilst the whistling wind
and the pouring rain
was crashing was against the windows.
Soon afterwards I was extremely starving
because I had been on the exercise machine
for about half an hour.
8.23am
So as quick as a flash I ran to the kitchen
to get some
breakfast.
8 comments:
Interesting choice of words, Joe. Definitely descriptive.
It's great to hear about your trip to Ireland, Joseph. And that is a wonderful photograph. I have been taking pictures for a long time but I don't think they are as good as yours.
Well done! And I look forward to reading more from you.
your blog is Great Joe. Keep it up cause i like reading your stories and looking at your cool pictures. You write very well. Clever boy x
Hi there :) I'm here because of your Dad's blog. I must say that I'm very impressed. I'm from Poland studing English philology, it's sad because I don't understand all the words! and feel a bit ashamed :) wish you luck! Caroline
Joseph,
You had a really fascinating trip to Ireland. Thank you for sharing. I am really glad to see you are a Christian. That is the path to be on. I live in Texas and am Sage's granddad. Thank you for posting to his blog. My name is Joseph too.
Hello, Joseph. I like your description of the stormy weather, especially the image of the lightening "bursting to get out."
Nice to meet you Joseph and to read you blog. You are a very clever boy. Your mother and father must be very proud of you.
Your blog keeps getting better and better! Your older articles are not as good as newer ones you have a lot more creativity and originality now keep it up!
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